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                                                       FADE IN

               INT. YOUNGSTOWN MENTAL HOSPITAL. DAY.

               A long hallway stretches out in front of us. Sterile. White.
               A HEAVYSET GUARD and TWO ORDERLIES accompany a YOUNG WOMAN in
               PALE GREEN HOSPITAL SCRUBS down the hall, approaching us.
               They stop and step into a conference room over half-way down
               the hall. She is JENNY MATTHEWS, around thirty, blonde,
               suicidally depressed and quite probably insane. An older man,
               DOCTOR JENKINS, steps out from a small kitchen across from
               the conference room, examining a folder full of papers. He
               holds a cup of coffee in his hand. With him is a tall, well
               dressed, dark-haired man, DAVID MATTHEWS. They talk for a
               moment. Their dialogue too faint for us to make out.
               Momentarily, the GUARD and the TWO ORDERLIES emerge and nod
               to the DOCTOR. David walks away, down the hall, while the
               Doctor steps inside... ...unaware of a DARK, LEGLESS TORSO of
               a human being pulling itself swiftly across the hallway,
               entering behind him.

                                                       CUT TO:

               INT. CONFERENCE ROOM. DAY.

               The Doctor wipes camera as he walks Left to Right, revealing
               one end of a LONG CONFERENCE TABLE. On that end, we see
               various medical books and journals, file folders and the
               detritus of bored and boring meetings past. Begin slowly
               dollying Right down the side of the conference table. High
               backed, black leather chairs wipe the foreground. More
               papers.

               BLACK CHAIR.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS
                             (Off-Screen)
                         Hello, Jenny. I'm glad you're
                         feeling better.

               A coffee cup, napkins and slightly-chewed ink-pen.

               BLACK CHAIR.

               A trickle of BLOOD on the table.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS (CONT'D)
                             (Off-Screen)
                         Sorry I hadn't been able to come by
                         since you were transferred. I also
                         wanted to tell you how sorry I was
                         to hear about your father.
                         Especially so soon after...what
                         happened.

               BLACK CHAIR. The SOURCE of that blood. An EARLY-TWENTIES
               BRUNETTE who is lying on her back on the conference table.
               Her arms are outstretched over her head, the wrists bound.
               She has a delicate collar around her neck and a thin chain,
               pulled taut, wrapped several times around her throat. She is
               writhing, gasping in pain, not from the CHAIN that may be
               strangling her, perhaps from the PLASTIC BAG over her head
               that cuts off her air, but most definitely from the KNIFE
               that is cutting deeply into her abdomen and from the weight
               of the KNIFE-WIELDING WOMAN lying on top of her. THAT WOMAN
               is nude, covered in what appears to be dried, gray MUD from
               head to toe. The mud has cracked along the small of her back,
               giving one the distinct impression of a tortured, desert
               floor. She pulls the knife upward, gutting her lover/victim
               in the process-- her body blocking the most visceral aspects
               of the image-- but the sound and the body language of the two
               is enough to tell it all.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS (CONT'D) (CONT'D)
                             (Off-Screen)
                         So. What do you think of our little
                         facility?

               Continuing the Dolly, past the murder scene, we see a pale,
               ALBINO MAN, on his haunches, squatting on the table. He tears
               at a bloody scrap of flesh in his hands and casts quick,
               furtive glances around him, watchful of some predator, real
               or imagined that we cannot see. Then, we catch a glimpse of
               the LEGLESS CREATURE that entered from the hallway. He
               disappears over the end of the conference table. The Dolly
               comes to a stop after curving around behind the Doctor's
               chair, landing in a two shot of Jenny (right) and the Doctor
               (left). The table is CLEAR. Once we rounded the bend, passing
               the last chair, there is no sign of the demonic imagery.
               Everything is normal. Jenny is disheveled, though her
               attendants had tried to make her look presentable. Dark
               circles rim her eyes and her hair is tangled and tossed.
               CLOSE ON JENNY. She raises her head, looking up at the Doctor
               through the lids of her eyes.

                                   JENNY
                         It's Hell.

               REVERSE ANGLE. Our first real look at the good doctor. He's a
               heavy-set man with a friendly, world-weary face. His eyes
               hold a slight twinkle that lets you know that the laugh lines
               around his mouth were earned honestly.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS
                         And the food's even worse. Look, I
                         want to help you get better so you
                         can go home.

               Wider on the two of them. Jenny gives an involuntary shudder.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS (CONT'D)
                             (opening a folder in front
                              of him.)
                         Now, I need to go over exactly what
                         happened that night. It's rough, I
                         know. But let's just get through
                         this,ok? She nods,
                         slowly...nervously.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS (CONT'D)
                         We know that you and David brought
                         other women into your bedroom. In
                         fact, two ladies testified in the
                         trial that while your sexual play
                         was at times a little extreme, they
                         never felt endangered in anyway.

               FLASH IMAGE: A pair of wrists tied by white cord stand out in
               sharp contrast from a dark wooden headboard. Close on Jenny.
               Not looking at the Doctor. FLASH IMAGE: Human Stop Motion.
               JENNY'S POV, crouched over a woman and her hand enters frame
               right, in a SLAPPING action. Each frame, changes--a DIFFERENT
               woman. All with the same action. Each frame showing a
               continuation of a woman being struck in the face, played in
               realtime, telling us that there were many lovers and many
               nights where the play was rough. All in about a second.
               Closer on Jenny. Still not looking at the Doctor.

                                   JENNY
                         Crystal says she can't breathe.

               The Doctor takes his glasses off and looks at Jenny.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS
                         Is that what she said that night?
                         No answer.

               FLASH IMAGE: LOOKING DOWN THE LENGTH OF THE TABLE, toward the
               door. The images of the CLAY WOMAN and the Dead girl are
               gone. In their place is another stunningly beautiful woman,
               nude, slowly crawling toward camera. Her body is covered in
               cuts, three to four inches long. This CUT WOMAN leaves a
               trail of blood in her wake.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS (CONT'D) (CONT'D)
                         Jenny?
                             (beat)
                         Was it common for you to practice
                         asphyxiation during sex with your
                         friends?

               Jenny looks lost. Confused.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS (CONT'D) (CONT'D)
                         That's your particular fetish,
                         right? You cut off the air supply
                         to heighten the experience? Is that
                         why the plastic bag was over
                         Crystal's head? Jenny lets a tear
                         escape her eyes.

                                   JENNY
                         Yes. But...she said she couldn't
                         breathe.

               A dark shape moves behind Jenny to one side, disappearing in
               our peripheral vision. Opposite, the CUT-WOMAN rises into
               frame, smelling Jenny's neck, her ear... Reverse on the
               doctor.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS
                         But that's part of the thrill for a
                         dominant, isn't it? Holding a
                         submissive's life in your hands?

               Medium Shot of Jenny. No CUT-WOMAN, nothing out of the
               ordinary, but she moves as if she's straining away from his
               attentions.

                                   JENNY
                         She had asthma. She'd...
                             (beat)
                         She'd forgotten her inhaler. So I
                         didn't do that with her.

               FLASH IMAGES: Crystal lying on her back in bed. Her eyes wide
               open. The fogged, Plastic Bag over her head. Everything is
               still until she takes in a big gulp of air, sucking the
               plastic to her face. The doctor leans back. Puts his glasses
               back on. He's trying to see something in the girl that he
               can't put his finger on.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS
                         You had some drugs that night.

                                   JENNY
                         We'd smoked a little before we went
                         to bed. I had some wine. Picking up
                         the medical report.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS
                         And the depressants?

                                   JENNY
                         I...was tired. David and Crystal
                         wanted to keep fooling around and I
                         just crashed on the couch.

               FLASH IMAGES: Jenny, wearing panties and a t-shirt, steps
               into the bathroom. She opens the mirrored medicine cabinet,
               showing the reflection of her husband and their lover in bed
               in the next room. She shakes some pills into her hand and
               pops them into her mouth.

                                   JENNY (CONT'D)
                         I took some stuff to help me sleep.

               The doctor looks at her for a moment then quietly asks...

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS
                         And when you woke up?

               Jenny jerks her head to right, looking at the door to the
               room. We see nothing, but then... JENNY'S POV: The deadly
               tableau is back. The clay-covered woman and Crystal's
               body...The Albino...the DOORS OPEN, but we see no one enter
               or leave. Jenny is frozen for a moment. She doesn't speak.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS (CONT'D)
                         Jenny, this is very important. What
                         did you see when you woke up? Jenny
                         turns her head back to the doctor.

               FLASH IMAGES: Jenny, straddling the body of Crystal, the bag
               over the dead girl's head...the knife in Jenny's hand. The
               husband, David reacts in horror.

                                   JENNY
                         I killed her.

               Jenny begins to shake, sobbing without the tears. The doctor
               puts his hand on hers, calming.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS
                         That's not what I asked. What did
                         you see?

               WIDE SHOT. The CLAY-COVERED WOMAN crawls off of the table,
               standing behind the doctor, caressing his cheek. We see her
               face clearly now. Her lips lined with black and red. Her red
               rimmed eyes glinting... ...Under the mud, it's clear that the
               Clay Woman is JENNY. The Albino is now standing in the
               corner, twitching and watching-- a demonic spectator, licking
               his blood-flecked lips.

                                   JENNY
                         I...

               She closes her eyes.

                                   JENNY (CONT'D)
                         I was sitting on top of Crystal. I
                         had the knife in my hand.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS
                         And?

                                   JENNY
                         And David came in from the
                         bathroom. Screaming. He was in
                         shock...

               The Doctor leans back. The Clay-Woman shows Jenny the knife
               in her hand and gestures toward the Doctor.

                                   JENNY (CONT'D)
                         NO!

               The Doctor bolts up in his seat.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS
                         What?

                                   JENNY
                         Nothing...

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS
                         You have to tell me...Do you
                         remember killing Crystal? Or
                         getting into bed with her while
                         David was in the bathroom?

               She just sits silently for a moment. She looks down to her
               right, to see... ...A LITTLE GIRL, blonde, no more than four
               years old in a pink party dress, looking up at her.

                                   LITTLE GIRL
                         Do you?

               JENNY closes her eyes and turns away, but when she opens
               them, she sees TWO WOMEN to her left. One Standing, the other
               kneeling in front of her. The Standing Woman has one hand up
               to her mouth and the Kneeling Woman is moving her head back
               and forth as if she's chewing or licking the other woman.
               CLOSER, The Kneeling woman's hand holds a LONG PAIR OF
               Forceps used for stitching wounds. She's biting at thread
               with her teeth. She's Stitching the Standing Woman's arm to
               her side. CLOSE on the Standing Woman's face. Her middle
               finger of her other hand is in her mouth, her lips stitched
               shut around it. Her eyes closed, stitched shut. Jenny closes
               her eyes again. TIGHTLY. NOT OPENING THEM.

                                   JENNY
                         No.

               I don't know. I don't remember anything after I lay down on
               the couch! The Doctor closes the folder.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS
                         It's OK, Jenny. You're doing great.

               Behind the Doctor, the Clay-Woman begins a sexy dance, then
               drags the tip of her blade against her abdomen, cutting a
               vertical slit, three or four inches tall. A trickle of blood
               escapes and with the two middle fingers of her free hand
               begins to suggestively massage the top of the cut-- a
               bizarre, perverted parody of self-love that causes Jenny to
               flinch and cover her face.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS (CONT'D)
                         You and David always taped your
                         threesomes, didn't you?

                                   JENNY
                         Yes.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS
                         But not that night? There was no
                         tape in the camera. Why not?

               Tight on the Clay-Woman's abdomen. On the cut. We see two
               big, hairy hands reach around from behind her. The finger
               nails are chipped and yellowed. The fingers touch either side
               of the slit in her stomach, at first sensuously, then
               roughly, pulling it wider apart. Blood flows freely. Wider,
               we see a massive MUSCLE MAN behind the Clay Woman. He is
               grinning wickedly, and she is clearly in ecstacy. Finger
               length bone-like HORNS grow from his forearms. CLOSE on
               Jenny. In shock from the bizarre display. Jenny POV-- SLOW
               MOTION. Looking down the length of the table. The LITTLE GIRL
               is leaving the room.
               She looks back, waving at Jenny, the top half of her face now
               a BROWN, DECAYING SKULL. Reverse Angle, Wide Shot: The room
               is NORMAL again. There's a beat before Jenny can talk again.

                                   JENNY
                         David did the taping. He must've
                         forgot.

               The LEGLESS TORSO is on the table again, pushing past the
               dead body of Crystal, he makes his way toward Jenny. She
               looks at him in horror.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS
                         Jenny, what is it?

               The Torso is that of a man...badly burnt. He turns his
               attention to the Clay Woman, looking at her CUT. He reaches
               up, probing the wound. The MUSCLE MAN grinning a toothy grin.
               CLOSE on Torso's HAND, probing the cut. He pulls something
               out. A small, rectangular object. Jenny looks at him, then
               slowly shows recognition. The BURNT MAN slides the bloody
               CAMCORDER TAPE across the table. As she places her finger
               tips on it to take the tape, he touches her hand for a
               moment, then with a violent jerk, turns back and scurries
               away, over the side of the table and is gone.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS (CONT'D)
                         Where did you get that?

               Jenny looks down at the tape (Non-Bloody) in her hands.

                                   JENNY
                         You see it, too?

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS
                         Where did you get this tape?

                                   JENNY
                         My father.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS
                         Jenny...your father's dead. Jenny
                         turns the tape over in her hands.

                                   JENNY
                         Did they cut his legs off...getting
                         him out of the crash? The Doctor is
                         CLEARLY taken aback.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS
                         They were crushed...in the wreck.
                         Did one of the nurses tell you?

                                   JENNY
                         No...

               She hands the tape over to the Doctor.

                                   JENNY (CONT'D)
                         Please...just play it.

               The Doctor stands up and puts the tape into a Camera on a
               shelf at the head of the table, flipping on a TV in the
               process. VIDEO: The IMAGE is a relatively unsexy home-video
               camera from a high-angle looking down on the bed. VIDEO: We
               see David and CRYSTAL fooling around while JENNY waves
               goodnight and goes off to the bathroom. AT THIS POINT, the
               door to the conference room opens and David steps inside,
               followed by the SECURITY GUARD and ORDERLY from earlier.

                                   DAVID
                         Sorry to bother you, Doctor...if
                         you're finished talking to Jenny I
                         wanted to see her for a few minutes
                         before I go.
                             (noticing the tape)
                         What are you watching? The doctor
                         looks at David questioningly.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS
                         It's the tape from...that night.
                         Did you find it and give it to
                         Jenny?

                                   JENNY
                             (quietly)
                         I told you my Father gave it to me.

                                   DAVID
                             (overlapping dialogue)
                         There was no tape that night. We
                         went over all that.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS
                         We can clear this up right now...

               David steps toward the Doctor, obviously upset. The Security
               Guard blocks his path. SLOW-MOTION: The MUSCLE MAN roughly
               pushes the CLAY WOMAN onto the table, looking at David, who
               of course doesn't see him.

                                   DAVID
                         You have no right to look at my
                         private property!

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS
                             (sternly)
                         That's correct. But SHE ...
                             (pointing at Jenny)
                         ...has no rights over personal
                         property. You signed them over to
                         this hospital. And that GIVES me
                         the right to watch HER tape.

               Ronald. The Security Guard (Ronald) roughly pushes David into
               a black chair, mimicking the move the MUSCLE man had made a
               moment before. The Doctor Fast Forwards and we see... VIDEO:
               Petting, more Fast Forward, then the bag going over Crystal's
               Head, then writhing, then something obviously goes wrong.
               David yanks the bag off of Crystal's head, but she won't wake
               up. He slaps her. Nothing. He's sweating it. He puts the bag
               back over her head. VIDEO: Then he leaves the room. A moment
               later, he comes back in, dragging Jenny with him. She's
               almost comatose. He puts her on top of Crystal, placing her
               hands around the dead woman's throat. Jenny practically
               passes out on top of her. He leaves the room for a moment,
               then comes back screaming. Jenny bolts awake-- realizing what
               she must have done. He yanks her off the dead girl and the
               two scream at each other until he reaches for the telephone
               to call 911. VIDEO: The Video resolves to WHITE NOISE. The
               audio static trails off to a low hum. All eyes are on David,
               who has gone white. He's sweating. One Orderly looks at the
               Doctor, then leaves the room. The other Orderly takes up a
               post in front of the door. The Security Guard has his gun
               drawn.

                                   DAVID
                         I never meant to blame you...

                                   JENNY
                         Bullshit.

               Wide shot of the various demons looking at each other,
               nervously. Jenny is more confused than ever. She turns to the
               Doctor.

                                   JENNY (CONT'D)
                         But what about...the knife?

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS
                         There was no knife, Jenny. Never
                         was. That was a false memory your
                         mind made up.

               We all have our personal demons. Jenny, still looking
               confused, looks better physically than she did earlier.
               This is SUBTLE. Her hair's a little neater. The dark circles
               are nearly gone. She's sitting up straighter.

                                   JENNY
                         I didn't kill her.
                             (realizing) )
                         I didn't kill Crystal.

               Jenny looks back at the television with the WHITE NOISE.
               DOWNSHOT, PULL BACK the length of the table, passing all of
               the demons, the SOUND of the WHITE-NOISE distorted in a long
               whine as all of the Demons are looking at Jenny, then they
               turn, purposefully fixing their gaze on David. Jenny's POV.
               The Demons TURNING AWAY. CLOSE on JENNY. Dumbstruck. DAVID'S
               POV. The various demons crawling, writhing, MOVING toward
               him. David freaks-- Now, HE sees these things and breaks
               down. The Doctor stands, shouting at the orderly and Security
               Guard.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS
                         Get him out of here! Sedate him and
                         put him in Ward Three until the
                         police arrive!

               The men drag the quite insane David out of the room, the
               demons following.

                                   JENNY
                         But the tape...

               The Doctor, still standing, is beside himself. The situation
               has just turned on its head.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS
                         I'm sorry, Jenny. I have no idea...
                         I can't explain the tape. He takes
                         a long look at her.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS (CONT'D)
                         I need to make sure that David's
                         dealt with properly...I'll send a
                         nurse in to take you back to your
                         room. Okay, Jenny? Jenny is looking
                         back at the VIDEO NOISE.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS (CONT'D)
                         Jenny?

                                   JENNY
                         Yeah. I'll be fine. The Doctor
                         heads for the door.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS
                         I promise we won't keep you any
                         longer than necessary.

               You'll probably go home by the end of the week. Close on
               Jenny.

                                   JENNY
                             (distant)
                         Good.
                             (beat)
                         Doctor Jenkins?

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS
                         Yes?

                                   JENNY
                         Did you mean what you said about
                         each of us having our own personal
                         demons?

               Over Jenny's Shoulder, looking at Doctor, standing in the
               door.

                                   DOCTOR JENKINS
                         I think we all have something that
                         plagues us...something that
                         represents a black mark on our
                         soul...
                             (he smiles)
                         Not very scientific of me to say
                         that, I suppose.
                             (beat)
                         Why do you ask?

               Entering frame left, we see the Albino walking toward the
               Doctor and joining him at his side, the Doctor oblivious to
               him. He gives Jenny a sidelong glance. Twitching. Grinning.
               CLOSE on Jenny.

                                   JENNY
                         Just wondering...that's all.

               PULL BACK to reveal the the CUT WOMAN sitting beside Jenny,

               twirling her finger in traces of blood on the table.

               THE END
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